Haiku II
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The rose buds blooming
Our lust wildly consuming
Not a thorn in sight
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Winter wind chills me
My emotions still for now
Warm my heart again
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Misunderstood words
Spark moments of searing doubt
A love mistaken
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I melt from your stare
Your touch ignites my passion
Hot as summer sun
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His cries in the night
Reaching a pelting frenzy
Swept by destruction
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The poets last words
Of true love and desire
Sadly never found
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Her dark eyes
Led me up the stormy path
I have lost control
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The leaves of autumn
So gently kissing the ground
Your lips I have found
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© VC Maas-April 2010
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- Haiku
Abstract sky above Canvas painted mystery Marble colored life ************************* Your touch electric Your words scorching and painful Leaving me stunned **********************************... - Haiku III
Sultry though she is Hide your footprints in the snow Danger is her name Lust for each other Greedily we bare our skin In the summer sun Tears falling gently As a first springtime shower Love...
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Loved this haikus. It's the kind of poetry I like best. To write and to read it.
love it great poem thanks for read
Thanks Noble for stopping by!
Tantrum, your comments are always welcomed.
Voice, glad you enjoyed the poetry.
Beautiful poetry, I like haikus too. :)
Excellent work!
I love your poems! Really enjoyed them.
Thanks hypnodude,DustinsMom and jill of alltrades for taking the time to read my poetry.
Hi, this is really good. I never really knew what Haiku poetry was before. But now I understand. Thanks nell
Great poem!
Europe Walker,
My favorite haiku was:
"The leaves of autumn
So gently kissing the ground
Your lips I have found"
because it reminds me of nature loving nature. It's a self-love that we all can learn from. It's hard to distinguish between self-love and egotism, but here's the key difference. To self-actualize, we must discern God within us, the part of our soul that's pure, and how everyone, equally, share divine purpose. Narcissism is the delusion that one is superior to all others. The difference is clear: mutual, homogenous chaos or an imposed hierarchy.
I, for one, chose to see the beauty of chaos. At the end of the day, it isn't so disordered after all. But how the puzzles fit together won't be revealed until after we're dead.
That's my opinion anyway.... I hope I didn't go too off track.
Thanks for sharing this,
Dan
Noble Mongoose 2 years ago
These are really good.